Use a friendly opening.
Hi Alex,
Hello Sara,
Say why you are writing.
I’m writing to tell you about a memorable experience I had during my last holiday.
I want to tell you about an amazing day I had on my last holiday.
Describe where you were.
Where did you go?
What was the place like?
Use adjectives:
beautiful, crowded, relaxing, exciting
Explain what happened, in order.
Use past tenses and linkers:
First,
Then,
After that,
Finally,
Explain how you felt and why it was memorable.
I felt happy / excited / surprised
It was unforgettable because…
End the email naturally.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Write back soon and tell me about your holiday.
Bye,
Best wishes,
See you,
Your name